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Carloniel

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By disgrace, it does not seem posible, each route is like a very long chapter

Havent played yet, but I'm sure its going to be the bomb

whaaaaa?

dude, this is cool

Looks good, just that about the artstyle, its weird, they have bodies of men and faces of Kids, you should check that

Maybe he still writes the thing, or he is waiting to give a full release

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I like the game, hehe, but I have a question, did the protagonist always 


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Did the MC always enrraged in the 3rd day?
I could swear he was crying when I readed it first time, maybe I were very tired as I readed this at night, tbh, Idk, I liked it, but if it never happened then I guess its fine

Get 100% of the game and you will find why you dont want that

That can explain why HE knows about what to do with the EYE

Damn... Thats duckin' true...

I can say for sure he was a complete d--k, like, if THAT  was his final breaking point I can say Teak was a complete hipocrite, He litterally Logged on Shelter, attacked the main Mechanic even if the guy himself did not had a f--king idea of what he was, harrased the main chief of social relations, got a lot of friends and admirers and got a big dog as captain of his party, and the jerk had the AUDACITY of get in the worst moment posible with the main dogs and the dude who LITTERALLY RUNS THE PLACE ALONE just to tell them, NO, BOSS THEM, to get the human out just because he got all conspiranoic


Damn, he sure was an ungrateful idiot, hot or not, he never wanted to live, he was just a spiteful bastard, I guess people who ask the Route have not made the 100% of the game

Yeah, haha, Its just a starwars joke like: "Join the Dark Side... We have smoothies...

It seems he joined the "dark side"... nice :v

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Without being disrespectful, I think its fine in various aspects but it needs fixes in some stuff as a lot of people say, but about the speed, well, I can say that visual novels are slower than the average story because they can use more time telling stuff than comics, Tv Shows and Animated Series, given the ability of showing more with less resources, and also, that the player can read it calmly or extremely fast but looking at the pictures, I can recomend that it should take its time to move and just describe more the stuff, like, more dialogue, and maybe longer descriptions because the dialogues dont need an entire drawing to have the characters talking


Also, the characters are bigger than they should, I recomend making them X1.25 or X1.5 the size of a human being, because in real life its probable that a lot of them would not be taller than 2.72 meters (Higher recorded in human history [AKA: Extremely Rare])

Also... MC's Name is weird, Who calls someone like that in this world?
In fantasy is posible, but not in our Normal Land [xl]

nice, thank

Probably like Burned food, just that you will taste burnt Oxygen and then loose the sense of taste and feel extreme pain afterwards

Is the MC a human?

???

Calm down, not everyone works at "Shelter"-Like Speeds

Please be careful, and dont worry! we know life its hard, and we cant just get mad, we will never get like it, we'll wait all the time necesary

This is short, but believe me, its good

:v

Yeah, but they mention it some good time, and its weird to see a Horny part and get punched with weirdness

Hehe, thank [x')]

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[:l] ?

I mean its pretty much admirable, in my opinion, you should not feel bad about taking your time (I mean, making a VN is hard) and even more with that amount of stuff you made, so I mean that there is not a reason to feel sorry about any time-out, like, you really made a big effort, and that is awesome, sorry if I sounded or were rude, I'm not trying to be it at all.

Like, +70 sprites?! Damn, that is a lot...

[xl]

Maybe that event landed with a rogue AI, then it created machines especcially made to kill with some crazy computer-made stuff, I can imagine the fog being a proyection of machines to mess with your mine, and the machines using some material that causes light that induces PTSD

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With that massive amount of stuff is more than justified, if its not on the notes, you should say it

You need to do something especific, check what you have not done

Jusr got an update :v

Just get on the dowload part just above the coments, PC is windows and APK is for android devices, the other two are obvious, good luck and drink water My sir!

Yeah, we need to be patient, he needs support, not stress or haste

Art needs a shiton of time sometimes

He needs time, after all, he is working on it, but he is taking a break

OHHH, HECK YES!!!!!!!

Everything is great, but I can recomend the use of "()" for the thoughts, they get confusing with the dialogues.

That can confuse if you ask me

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I think all is great and I love this game, but I think it needs more portrait art, like the MC always have a smug face even in tension/weird moments, that my thoughts about it

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Do things, rutes, and other things of To-do, that unlocks the saves

The saves are a prize for completition

2 days left for V22, Baby!

Check both conversations in the morning more carefully

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No, no :C , it's not that it offends or something Xl , it's just that it's weird since humans are already normal and well, the thing that felt weird is that their designs didn't fit well with the rest of the art, I think the idea is good, but in this case it's weird since the mix of textures is weird.

I'm sorry if I were rude, Thank you so much for the answer.

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Tbh, them looking weird dont make them ordinary, I think the expirience can inprove a LOT if they look normal, or what we can consider "normal", because that can make them look even more boring and REAL

Because I mean Weird in terms of the textures and normal looking humans, not in their race

They look like they are from another game

The humans look weird compared to the other characters, the game is awesome but thats a big problem in the inmersion

This game is great, but the human models are extreme cancer, pls make them better if you can, I'm loving the game a lot, and that problem makes me sad :'(