By disgrace, it does not seem posible, each route is like a very long chapter
Carloniel
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I like the game, hehe, but I have a question, did the protagonist always
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Did the MC always enrraged in the 3rd day?
I could swear he was crying when I readed it first time, maybe I were very tired as I readed this at night, tbh, Idk, I liked it, but if it never happened then I guess its fine
Damn... Thats duckin' true...
I can say for sure he was a complete d--k, like, if THAT was his final breaking point I can say Teak was a complete hipocrite, He litterally Logged on Shelter, attacked the main Mechanic even if the guy himself did not had a f--king idea of what he was, harrased the main chief of social relations, got a lot of friends and admirers and got a big dog as captain of his party, and the jerk had the AUDACITY of get in the worst moment posible with the main dogs and the dude who LITTERALLY RUNS THE PLACE ALONE just to tell them, NO, BOSS THEM, to get the human out just because he got all conspiranoic
Damn, he sure was an ungrateful idiot, hot or not, he never wanted to live, he was just a spiteful bastard, I guess people who ask the Route have not made the 100% of the game
Without being disrespectful, I think its fine in various aspects but it needs fixes in some stuff as a lot of people say, but about the speed, well, I can say that visual novels are slower than the average story because they can use more time telling stuff than comics, Tv Shows and Animated Series, given the ability of showing more with less resources, and also, that the player can read it calmly or extremely fast but looking at the pictures, I can recomend that it should take its time to move and just describe more the stuff, like, more dialogue, and maybe longer descriptions because the dialogues dont need an entire drawing to have the characters talking
Also, the characters are bigger than they should, I recomend making them X1.25 or X1.5 the size of a human being, because in real life its probable that a lot of them would not be taller than 2.72 meters (Higher recorded in human history [AKA: Extremely Rare])
Also... MC's Name is weird, Who calls someone like that in this world?
In fantasy is posible, but not in our Normal Land [xl]
[:l] ?
I mean its pretty much admirable, in my opinion, you should not feel bad about taking your time (I mean, making a VN is hard) and even more with that amount of stuff you made, so I mean that there is not a reason to feel sorry about any time-out, like, you really made a big effort, and that is awesome, sorry if I sounded or were rude, I'm not trying to be it at all.
Like, +70 sprites?! Damn, that is a lot...
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No, no :C , it's not that it offends or something Xl , it's just that it's weird since humans are already normal and well, the thing that felt weird is that their designs didn't fit well with the rest of the art, I think the idea is good, but in this case it's weird since the mix of textures is weird.
I'm sorry if I were rude, Thank you so much for the answer.
Tbh, them looking weird dont make them ordinary, I think the expirience can inprove a LOT if they look normal, or what we can consider "normal", because that can make them look even more boring and REAL
Because I mean Weird in terms of the textures and normal looking humans, not in their race
They look like they are from another game